Thursday, July 22, 2010

My Report: Part Four

Duality.

It's a term to describe the dual nature of our characters. We see it when a character combats with an inner conflict or when we think a character should act one way, but has the capacity to do another. At Dave's workshop, he had us write a scene with this concept. I'd read about it, thought about it, but never sat down to write it for homework.

So, for fragility, I decided to show Cheyenne's inner conflict. Teo, her seductive math teacher captures her and explains zombies surround them on the outside. For this scene, I wrote Cheyenne's thoughts--that she is attracted to Teo, but is also terrified of him. She wants to run away, but how could she when it may be worse on the outside? As you can see, duality is an element that can really shine in this scene.

But we can write our antagonists with this as well. Teo, for instance, is a sadistic tyrant. But, he has a soft spot for Cheyenne. When he kills others, he confides in her and lets her off when she breaks his rules. This can help our characters to feel real.

Think about it. How many of us are so extreme, so one dimensional, that we don't make exceptions to the rule. I LOVE eccentricities in characters, but it makes them even more fascinating to find that little quirk, the reason why they change from the default.

Duality--it's even a cool word. What character in fiction have you seen this concept evinced?

14 comments:

  1. Thanks for this post! It really helped me think. Character development is something I can never get enough of. I hope I can become good at it SOMEDAY!

    Thanks for your thoughts.

    I enjoyed your blog.

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  2. Hey, Miss Pickwickian. Thanks for stopping by! Glad to give you something to think about. I thought about it anyway...

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  3. I can't think of a character right off -- the heat is shriveling my brain, or maybe it's my age! But I'm printing out your comments to ponder. This is very good.

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  4. Ah, Ann. What would I do without your encouragement. Thanks for always being around.

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  5. Giving people dimension, and the ability to be confused about feelings makes them real. No one cares about characters that don't feel real. Thanks for the post.

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  6. Great post and true that. Characters lacking duality are one dimensional cardboard cutouts who are interchangeable as plot devices or as Mary Sue or Marty Stu self-gratification characters for their creators. Not very interesting in real life and much less so in fiction.

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  7. Sounds like my baddie is duality! And you are right not many people are.

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  8. Jolene, you summed it up perfectly. Thank you for coming by again! I clicked on your profile to go to your blog, but nothing comes up. Let me know when you start one!

    Ann, me too. :)

    sarahjayne, ah, don't you sound brilliant. True. Way to say it with that stalwart tone.

    Avalon, your baddie?

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  9. Excellent post... now I'm thinking about my characters. Conflict seems to bring out duality in a character... I was actually thinking of a character who DIDN'T display duality, The Princess Bride's Vizzini, and look where it got him? On the other hand, Inigo Montoya shows duality right off the bat, by helping Wesley get to the top of the cliff, offering Wesley trust, when he could have dropped him. He's bent on vengeance and is a hired thug, but is a very good person.
    Gotta love it.

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  10. Krista, I love your comment. Inigo Montoya is such a stud!! Thanks for existing, woman. You make my day.

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  11. Sounds like your story has changed a lot since the last draft I read! Good job of doing your homework!

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  12. Great post. This is an effective tool.

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  13. Does Darth Vader count?

    Love your new background, btw!

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